Live4MusiC

Don't know if I'm posting in the right section but here goes.

So I composed this song for my Audio module I'm taking in school. We we're told to use loop tracks available on softwares like Soundtrack Pro but I went the extra mile to fully compose the song. I also recorded, engineered, mixed and mastered the whole track. I need feedback and constructive criticism on the song because I know it can be a whole lot better. The guitar tone itself sucks shit so I might be re-doing them. So, fire away with the comments please. Thanks

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Hahah, yea I agree with the tone of the guitar. I'm not very satisfied with it so I'm going to re-record them with a more better and workable tone. As for the solo, I like your idea of giving a more aggessive solo. I might be re-writing that part as well. Thanks for the feedback. Really like your ideas. :D

oh btw...maybe you should put up the lyrics too heh

Lyrics as requested.

This poison dwells within our blood

The rage that fuels our every grudge

The inner beast waiting to be unleashed

This primal instinct waiting for it’s feast

The siren’s scream shall mark the time

For this oblivious world to begin their whine

Awake the dead and consume the living

The time shall come to rise to begin the killing

Blood will shed and flesh be torn

This dark new kingdom shall be born

Tyrants rise while slaves fall weak

Now your life starts to look bleak

Now, we rise and inherit the Earth

Your life shall seep into the dirt

We’ll rise and conquer this Earth

Your life sunk deep into the dirt

This vermin swims within our veins

The spark that fuels our rotting brains

The inner beast waiting to be unleashed

This rabid instinct dying for it’s feast

The banshee’s cry shall alert the time

For this treacherous world to admit their prime

Allow the dead to resume their pleasure

The will to greet the world with this grand new terror